You talk a lot about what you did but you don't summarise what you found out. State clearly what the convention of all three products are at the start of this question (after you have explained the research you did. There is also more to video conventions than just Goodwin (which you do talk about well) At times this appears too unscripted - try and cut out the bit where you go off topic. You need to talk about WHY you were conventional and why you broke some conventions. At the end you start to tal again about research - move this to the start where you are also talking about research. You need to spice this up a bit. As you talk about things cut away to show them - screen grabs, stills, screen casts, short video sequences etc. You are not using this technology at a high level and there are marks for the use of ICT skills
You talk a lot about what you did but you don't summarise what you found out. State clearly what the convention of all three products are at the start of this question (after you have explained the research you did. There is also more to video conventions than just Goodwin (which you do talk about well) At times this appears too unscripted - try and cut out the bit where you go off topic. You need to talk about WHY you were conventional and why you broke some conventions. At the end you start to tal again about research - move this to the start where you are also talking about research. You need to spice this up a bit. As you talk about things cut away to show them - screen grabs, stills, screen casts, short video sequences etc. You are not using this technology at a high level and there are marks for the use of ICT skills
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